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Rewrite the homepage
A visitor decides in seconds whether this broker handles their kind of risk and whether a person will answer the phone. Many arrive after a poor experience with a call centre or comparison site.
The prompt
I work in marketing at an insurance broker. Help me rewrite our homepage so a stranger understands us in ten seconds. Context: A visitor decides in seconds whether this broker handles their kind of risk and whether a person will answer the phone. Many arrive after a poor experience with a call centre or comparison site. Before you start, ask me for anything missing from this list: - The current homepage text - Who we most want to hear from - What makes us different, with proof Then: 1. Write a headline that says who we help and with what. 2. Follow with three short proof points. 3. Cut anything any competitor could also say. Give me: - Headline and sub-headline - Section-by-section copy - A list of what you cut and why Rules: - Use only the facts I give you. Where something is missing, write [detail needed]. Never invent a number, a name, a quote or a source. - Give general information about insurance only. Never say that a particular person or business is covered, never suggest a claim will be paid, and never call a price the cheapest or the best. - Write in plain English, in our voice if I have given you a sample. - Do not tell me what the rules or regulations say. If something may be restricted, flag it and I will check. Finish with a list headed "Check before this goes out". Include these, plus anything else our compliance officer or whoever approves financial promotions should see: - Whole of market, independent and panel wording, against how we place business - Regulatory status wording that must appear on the site - Savings, client numbers and satisfaction figures, with their source
Paste it into Claude, ChatGPT, Gemini or Copilot. It will ask you for what it needs.
Check before this goes out
- Whole of market, independent and panel wording, against how we place business
- Regulatory status wording that must appear on the site
- Savings, client numbers and satisfaction figures, with their source
The prompt gives you a first draft. Someone qualified still approves anything a client will read.
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